Tuesday, September 28, 2004

Haiku hari Selasa

Ketaidenwa oto
Yume meiki
Aishite imasu


Telefon berbunyi
Mengingat mimpi
Saya sayang kamu

Telephone rang
Remember the dreams
I love you

A haiku is Japanese peotic form, that contain seventeen syllables arranged in five,seven and five syllables respectively in three rows. And my Malay version haiku have 20 syllables, with eight, five and seven syllables for each rows. It's mine!

2 comments:

Leyla Shuri said...

ya betullah tu, ini haiku waris yang tersendiri :)

waris said...

Oklah kalau mcm tu ye? Ganbate kudasai!!! :D